"Superficial minds live off of ingenious lies.
I refuse to abolish ones faults in order to penetrate their qualities.
My fear of loneliness is blanketed by a feeling of reality,
Because everlasting is as good as non-existent."
AND
"The halt has seized, the emotions let loose.
For so long, the deception of ones own was the answer.
My ability to overtake reality and conjure it into a dream is successful until I choose to let go.
Does this make me a powerful man, or do my insecurities shine through this translucent life, reflecting the true cowardliness and fear behind my actions?"
I refuse to abolish ones faults in order to penetrate their qualities.
My fear of loneliness is blanketed by a feeling of reality,
Because everlasting is as good as non-existent."
AND
"The halt has seized, the emotions let loose.
For so long, the deception of ones own was the answer.
My ability to overtake reality and conjure it into a dream is successful until I choose to let go.
Does this make me a powerful man, or do my insecurities shine through this translucent life, reflecting the true cowardliness and fear behind my actions?"
Take it easy on the critiquing please :)
Are these your words? If so, you really put yourself out there. Well done.
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Yes they are.
ReplyDeleteI've read published poetry that pales in comparison to that. lol. that's really really good. i use to write some back in the day. maybe i should revisit that
ReplyDeleteHey, that's quite a compliment, thanks a lot! You should get back to writing, it is always fun reading others writing.
ReplyDeleteYes, Ross, you should write poetry....and Sean I think you should practice writing by catching up on your blog! :-)
ReplyDelete-k
Hahaha, fair enough.
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